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I Heart Raymond Carver (1938-1988)

I just finished reading Raymond Carver’s “Neighbors”, and I found myself drawn into minimalist fiction once again. Initially, I wasn’t sure what to do with the dialogue, as I don’t remember “The Swimmer” including that much. However, Carver establishes a nice rhythm with it, and it is not expositional.

The pattern of “Neighbors” and “The Swimmer” is similar. It starts with the protagonist completing an activity (i.e. feeding a cat or swimming in his neighbor’s pools) and progressively makes that activity more and more awkward. It makes me wonder if Carver’s other stories are similar or if ever he experiments in a style that is more difficult for him.

Also, I appreciate Carver’s (okay, I’m going to say it)… “handrails”… throughout his story. Actually, I enjoy that his said handrails sometimes lead to nowhere. For example, initially I assumed the cat moved the story forward for Bill. Then, I assumed it was the Stone’s apartment. Towards the end, the reader realizes that it is not just Bill who is changing but also Arlene.  Finally, the key becomes a hindrance for Bill and Arlene not being able to enter the apartment together. Is this because that neither of them were supposed to be in the apartment together? If Bill and Arlene were ever jointly in their neighbor’s apartment, would they have the same experiences as they have had separately? Also, it seems as if they are leaning into each other at the end–realizing that each other is all they have… or, is it that they are leaning into the door to force it open? What will happen on the other side of that door? Why do I care more about what happens on the other side of the door than I do about the main characters?

Overall, 4 gold stars for Carver. Not five because “The Swimmer” is a million times better, and I prefer swimming over apartments.

Add comment November 10, 2009

I am in love with Donald Barthelme

So, I just finished reading D.B.’s “The School”, and not only is it absolutely perfectly depressing, it’s also perfectly written, especially the ending when Barthelme starts playing with language. Here is a taste for you:

“One day, we had a discussion in class. They asked me, where did they go? The trees, the salamander, the tropical fish, Edgar, the poppas and mommas, Matthew and Tony, where did they go? And I said, I don’t know, I don’t know. And they said, who knows? and I said, nobody knows. And they said, is death that which gives meaning to life? And I said no, life is that which gives meaning to life. Then they said, but isn’t death, considered as a fundamental datum, the means by which the taken-for-granted mundanity of the everyday may be transcended in the direction of –
I said, yes, maybe.
They said, we don’t like it.
I said, that’s sound.
They said, it’s a bloody shame!
I said, it is.
They said, will you make love now with Helen (our teaching assistant) so that we can see how it is done? We know you like Helen.
I do like Helen but I said that I would not.
We’ve heard so much about it, they said, but we’ve never seen it.
I said I would be fired and that it was never, or almost never, done as a demonstration. Helen looked out the window.
They said, please, please make love with Helen, we require an assertion of value, we are frightened.”

Beautiful, right?

The writing, the words.

Add comment May 7, 2009

Also Read… (Compliments of Emerging Writers Network)

Because I am in love with Dan Wickett, I have been stalking his site for a while. I also read the following recommendations and you should, too!:

Brady Udall “A Story”

Matt Bell “An Index of How Our Family was Killed”

Elizabeth Ellen “Samuel L. Jackson is Not a Good Name for a Rabbit”

Add comment May 4, 2009

The Duct Tape Brother by Daniel Torday

So, I have been checking out the short stories on Emerging Writer’s Network because Dan Wickett is featuring short stories. I just finished reading “The Duct Tape Brother” by Daniel Torday and found myself LOLing at his sheer awesome creativity. In short, a boy decides he wants to create a duct tape brother, so he does. They, of course, participate in several brotherly antics, until one day the duct tape brother gets bitten by a beagle and starts to unravel. The plot thickens, as they say, at this point, and the duct tape brother goes through several periods of sickness, including a hospital stay and some surgeries. All the while, the non-duct tape brother and non-duct tape brother’s parents remain vigilent. Essesntially, the story is structured similarly to any short story about a child who might have a fatal illness–same consequences, same thoughts/questions/emotions. The only difference is that said child is made of duct tape.

Oh, and he likes to pick his nose.

And just because of that… you should go read “The Duct Tape Brother”, compliments of Daniel Torday.

P.S. The link to his FB page is here: http://www.facebook.com/people/Daniel-Torday/553411463, though I have no idea whether or not he is the FB friendly type or not. So, add at your own risk.

Add comment May 4, 2009

Anton Chekhov’s The Album

An overview:

* Crying. Lots of crying.

* Patriotism should always be celebrated with large dinners.

* War=games to the younger generation.

* In the end, no matter what the experience, family is most important.

And, yet, I don’t think that’s quite it just yet.

Add comment May 4, 2009

Wharton Rocks my Socks off!

… only, I am not wearing socks today because I have grading to do. Keeps me focused. The sooner I get my grading done, the sooner I get to wear socks. Okay, slightly twisted, it started in my high school days when I was trying to motivate myself to finish a project. I came up with the idea that I wouldn’t wear socks until I had finished. So far, it has worked. And telling my little secret to other people always elicits smiles because they never quite get it. I am not sure, I do, either, other than it is a habit, and I like to maintain consistency. Now, then, on to E. F.

Ethan Frome by Edith Wharton 1862-1937

Lovely book, albeit more than slightly depressing. I love the language, especially the language of nature. It’s like Wharton has created a character out of place and nature. The dead sense of winter, with snow constantly falling, adds to the darkness of the novel. Powerfully awesome!

Mostly, I think that Wharton was attempting to play with narrative structure as she starts out with a separate narrative who seems distant from Ethan Frome’s story, then enters into the story of Frome, and finally ends with the unnamed narrator again. Ethan’s story centers around himself, Zeena (his wife whom he met after she moved in to help take care of his parents), and Mattie (Zeena’s cousin who has no place to go, but moves in to help take care of Zeena because now she is sick). Really, they are all a bit messed up, and it seems as if Ethan, while the central character of the novel, can never make a move which will define the story. The other characters, even Mattie, seem to have more control over the events of the story.

I would also say, then, that Wharton is making a commentary on women. Obviously, the last line of the book overtly speaks to that, “I don’t see’s there’s much difference between the Frome’s up at the farm and the Frome’s down in the graveyard; ‘cept that down there they’re all quiet and the women have got to hold their tongues.” Of course, since this is said by a woman (the younger Mrs. Hale), does that subvert the point altogether?

I love that Wharton is willing to play with the narrative, and to question some societal conventions about men and women. Wharton is taking risks, and as a female writer, I appreciate and connect with her audacity, courage, and bravery. Go Wharton.

I am still unsure about the narrative structure aspect. After reading some commentary, it would seem that Wharton took some flak from her own contemporaries for the choice of narrative structure. And, I agree. If this were shorter and in workshop, I would have said that the narrative structure was too easy. But, it’s not shorter, and it’s published by an amazing author, so I guess I can’t say stuff like that. Hmm… I am just thankful that in the end, I am not the manipulated narrator. Although, in saying that, I get the foreboding feeling, that as the reader, perhaps I really was the manipulated narrator.

Wow, she’s good.

Add comment April 30, 2009

William Gay

Right now I am reading “Wreck on the Highway”. Just finished “I Hate to See that Evening Sun Go Down”. After this, I need to read something more… female.

Add comment April 18, 2009

I don’t think I’ve mentioned my hatred of baseball…

… on my blog yet. Just to cover all of the bases.

(LOL’s at own baseball pun. Back to work on grading student papers.)

Reading Alice Munro. And Brandon Tice. Can you say, way awesomer than baseball?

Add comment April 17, 2009

Just So We’re Clear (This could potentially be very pathetic…)

The BBC believes most people will have only read 6 of the 100 books here. How do your reading habits stack up?
25. Though I claim that the Bible should count for 66 altogether which would put me closer to 80 something. Damn, I have a lot of catching up to do!
Instructions:
Look at the list and mark those you have read.
* = read it
** = read it, remember it.
$$ = own it, haven’t read yet.

So many books, so little time!

1 Pride and Prejudice Jane Austen
2 The Lord of the Rings JRR Tolkien $
3 Jane Eyre Charlotte Bronte
4 Harry Potter series JK Rowling * (not all of them)
5 To Kill a Mockingbird Harper Lee ** (FAVORITE BOOK!)
6 The Bible ** (I would hope so)
7 Wuthering Heights Emily Bronte * (Thank you, AP English)
8 Nineteen Eighty Four George Orwell * (See number 7)
9 His Dark Materials Philip Pullman * (Not all of them)
10 Great Expectations Charles Dickens *
11 Les Miserables Victor Hugo
12 Little Women Louisa M Alcott*
13 Tess of the D’Urbervilles Thomas Hardy
14 Catch 22
15 Complete Works of Shakespeare
16 Rebecca Daphne Du Maurier
17 The Hobbit JRR Tolkien
18 Birdsong Sebastian Faulk
19 Catcher in the Rye JD Salinger $
20 The Time Traveller’s Wife Audrey Niffenegger
21 Middlemarch George Eliot
22 Gone With The Wind Margaret Mitchell
23 The Great Gatsby F Scott Fitzgerald
24 Bleak House Charles Dickens
25 War and Peace Leo Tolstoy
26 The Hitch Hiker’s Guide to the Galaxy Douglas Adams
27 Brideshead Revisited Evelyn Waugh
28 Crime and Punishment Fyodor Dostoyevsky
29 Grapes of Wrath John Steinbeck
30 Alice in Wonderland Lewis Carroll
31 The Wind in the Willows Kenneth Grahame
32 Anna Karenina Leo Tolstoy
33 David Copperfield Charles Dickens
34 Chronicles of Narnia CS Lewis **
35 Emma Jane Austen
36 Persuasion Jane Austen
37 The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe CS Lewis **
38 The Kite Runner Khaled Hosseini *
39 Captain Corelli’s Mandolin Louis De Bernieres
40 Memoirs of a Geisha Arthur Golden
41 Winnie the Pooh AA Milne
42 Animal Farm George Orwell *
43 The Da Vinci Code Dan Brown *
44 One Hundred Years of Solitude Gabriel Garcia Marquez $
45 A Prayer for Owen Meaney John Irving
46 The Woman in White Wilkie Collins
47 Anne of Green Gables LM Montgomery *
48 Far From The Madding Crowd Thomas Hardy
49 The Handmaid’s Tale Margaret Atwood
50 Lord of the Flies William Golding *
51 Atonement Ian McEwan
52 Life of Pi Yann Martel $
53 Dune Frank Herbert **
54 Cold Comfort Farm Stella Gibbons
55 Sense and Sensibility Jane Austen
56 A Suitable Boy Vikram Seth
57 The Shadow of the Wind Carlos Ruiz Zafon
58 A Tale Of Two Cities Charles Dickens
59 Brave New World Aldous Huxley
60 The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Mark Haddon
61 Love In The Time Of Cholera Gabriel Garcia Marquez )
62 Of Mice and Men John Steinbeck **
63 Lolita Vladimir Nabokov
64 The Secret History Donna Tartt
65 The Lovely Bones Alice Sebold
66 Count of Monte Cristo Alexandre Dumas
67 On The Road Jack Kerouac **
68 Jude the Obscure Thomas Hardy
69 Bridget Jones’s Diary Helen Fielding
70 Midnight’s Children Salman Rushdie
71 Moby Dick Herman Melville *
72 Oliver Twist Charles Dickens
73 Dracula Bram Stoker
74 The Secret Garden Frances Hodgson Burnett
75 Notes From A Small Island Bill Bryson
76 Ulysses James Joyce
77 The Inferno Dante $ (borrowing… which is owning for the moment)
78 Swallows and Amazons Arthur Ransome
79 Germinal Emile Zola
80 Vanity Fair William Makepeace Thackeray
81 Possession AS Byatt *
82 A Christmas Carol Charles Dickens **
83 Cloud Atlas David Mitchell (Wait a minute…???)
84 The Color Purple Alice Walker
85 The Remains of the Day Kazuo Ishiguro (Saw the movie. Does that count?)
86 Madame Bovary Gustave Flaubert
87 A Fine Balance Rohinton Mistry
88 Charlotte’s Web EB White **
89 The Five People You Meet In Heaven Mitch Albom
90 Adventures of Sherlock Holmes Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
91 The Faraway Tree Collection Enid Blyton
92 Heart of Darkness Joseph Conrad * (Yes. It was painful. I cursed the names of many people that week!)
93 The Little Prince Antoine De Saint Exupery *
94 The Wasp Factory Iain Banks
95 Watership Down Richard Adams
96 A Confederacy of Dunces John Kennedy Toole
97 A Town Like Alice Nevil Shute
98 The Three Musketeers Alexandre Dumas
99 Hamlet William Shakespeare *
100 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Roald Dahl

3 comments February 27, 2009

Blurbing Book Club Book Reviewer

So, one of my all time favorite young adult authors, John Green, has a social networking site with his brother, Hank Green. As various people have commented and the site has grown, they have decided they need some moderators. John requested several informal applications from a variety of people, and after a few weeks, Hank informed people of their positions.

I am, hereby, the Blurbing Book Club Book Reviewer. My posts will be on Fridays here: http://nerdfighters.ning.com. I feel honored and slightly speechless. And, I am going to need several Young Adult book recommendations. I already have several ideas, but not quite enough for one per Friday! Whew!

Wait, wasn’t I supposed to be doing something productive like grading or studying for my GRE? Hmm…

1 comment February 19, 2009

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